Example of Enhanced Document with Editor's Comments
We will correct errors directly in the text via “Track Changes” and offer additional recommendations in the comments.
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Proofreading & Editing
Comment for 1:
“Sentence edited for parallel structure using “ing” verbs for each element of the series. I’ve made similar changes throughout the document for ease of readability.”
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2
Clarity Check
Comment for 2:
“I’ve revised to remove the construction “there was” from this sentence, and I’ve executed similar changes throughout the essay in accordance with CMOS 5.239.”
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3
Proofreading & Editing
Comment for 3:
“I suggest adding this clause, combining the deleted sentence below with this sentence to improve logical flow and reduce repetition of “early modern period”.”
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4
Structure Check
Comment for 4:
“Make sure to include all the important directions according to your topic. It is recommended to break the full text into structured blocks and describe each section in more detail.”
